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August 22, 2013

World’s Greatest Hamburger

World’s Greatest Hamburger

My brother will be surprised to know this post is about him—especially since it’s not a tribute to his death.

How did this come about, you ask? I was reading a book and, about halfway through, the author described yet another character with superlatives. I thought about it and realized that the book was rife with superlatives. Everyone was the prettiest, or strongest, or best at something. You can only read about “the best” once or twice before it loses its impact. Before long you’ll be glossing over the best and it will have no meaning. If you have four female characters who are all the most beautiful women in the world you begin to wonder about the person rating them.

So I decided to write about superlatives, but then I realized that to make my point I had to talk about my brother. Needless to say it ruined my night, week, month.

Enthusiastic

My brother is one of the most (superlative) enthusiastic people I know. He gets excited about movies, books, coffee, dogs, even people. But he reserves a special spot in his heart for hamburgers. I have heard him complain about a movie—once. I once noticed him making a sour face after sipping from a foul cup of coffee, and I have even witnessed him scowl at a nasty looking burrito, but…

He Has Never Met A Burger He Didn’t Like Love

I tried explaining to Chris that there had to be degrees to liking a burger. Not every one can be a five-star meal.

  • Some burgers you might like because you’re starving—so hungry that grass soup would taste good.
  • Other burgers might fall into the “good” category. I’d go back there and eat again, but it’s not my first choice.
  • Only a few should be categorized as the great ones. The burgers you would drive across town to get. The real five-star burgers.

This logic doesn’t sink in with Chris. He nods his head when I tell him, but with the next breath he’s telling me about yet another phenomenal burger. I’ve come to conclude that the hamburger joints should join forces and pay my brother for his services because, if you didn’t know him, he is so convincing that you’d probably go out right then and buy a burger.

And yes, he will talk to strangers about it. Chris is not shy. If you were standing in line with him and someone mentioned burger or even if he caught a whiff of a burger wafting over from a restaurant across the street—that would be enough to get him started. And trust me, once he’s started, there is no stopping him. He can describe a hamburger in such detail that even if you just ate, you’d find yourself hungry again. Even when you know it’s a lie, or at least an exaggeration, you’d still be tempted.

What Does This Have To Do With Writing?

The next time you’re writing a scene, or describing a character, think hard before you name them the best, or prettiest, or strongest, or fastest, or describe them or something they do with any superlative. Instead, let their actions or other characters’ reactions do the job for you.

Bottom Line

For those of you who tuned in to get a list of the world’s greatest hamburger joints—I didn’t have time to attach a link because there are 362 places on Chris’ list. Besides, I have to hurry up. He just told me about a new place that has the absolute best burger in the whole damn world!!!!

 

Ciao,

 

Giacomo

 

Giacomo Giammatteo is the author of:
No Mistakes Resumes
Murder Takes Time
Murder Has Consequences
A Bullet For Carlos
Finding Family

He lives in Texas where he and his wife have an animal sanctuary with 45 loving “friends.”

 

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7 Responses to “World’s Greatest Hamburger”

  1. This is the best blog about the most over-the-top Uncle to ever walk the planet that could ever be written!!!! (Enough superlatives?) Ha ha!

    Suggestion: I hope you take a pic of Chris eating one of said super-burgers and frame it, along with a signed print-out of this blog. 😉 Or better yet….a series of framed pics with *each* super-burger with each one labeled “best burger”.

    PS – In seriousness though, I agree about the superlatives. And I liked the fact that one of your female leads had an imperfect nose.

  2. Last week he came in two days in a row with suggestions on two different places for the best burgers.
    Giacomo recently posted..World’s Greatest HamburgerMy Profile

  3. I love these blogs. I try to read them every week. It makes me feel connected to you guys even though we are so far away. I have to say that this is one of my favorite because I can see Chrissy all pumped up using his “outside voice” in Aunt Berry’s 4×4 kitchen to just tell you that was the best and the whole time your thinking my god I may never hear right again. 🙂 Keep up the great work!

  4. You’re right, Brian. And you hit it on the head with his “outside voice” because he has no inside voice. I might have exaggerated with the 362 restaurants, but not by much. Say hi to everyone.
    Giacomo recently posted..World’s Greatest HamburgerMy Profile

  5. Great thoughts. Superlatives are overused to the point that the words have lost their power.
    Ben Lane Hodson recently posted..I Turned Off the News and Felt HappierMy Profile

  6. Thanks for stopping by, Ben. And yes, you’re right. A few weeks ago my wife was watching a news program and I heard the newscaster use the word “very” 11 times in the last half hour of the show.
    Giacomo recently posted..Pros and Cons of Independent PublishingMy Profile

  7. Hilarious! I can’t think of a word more bland for adding emphasis than very. Yet, it’s one of the most used.
    Ben Lane Hodson recently posted..I Turned Off the News and Felt HappierMy Profile

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